IELTS Writing: Bài mẫu Writing Task 2 và một số từ vựng trong bài

Trong bài hôm nay, hãy tham khảo qua một bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2 cùng với một số từ vựng, bài viết phải ít nhất được 250 từ, chú ý các lỗi đánh vần và ngữ pháp trong bài:

Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example, working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children).

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that school curricula should include community work, and pupils ought to do it free of charge. This essay will show that such experience at school can be beneficial for children as they learn to be better people and more responsible citizens of their country.

Undoubtedly, volunteering teaches people to empathise with others, not to be indifferent to others’ needs and lend a hand to strangers when it is needed. It is crucial that children acquire these qualities since a very early age, and schools can provide a great opportunity to do that. Looking from my vantage point, I can say that the school where I used to study made me a kinder, more considerate person when my fellow pupils and I participated in a special programme that was aimed at helping older people do housework.

Many educators around the world claim that it is important to make even young children aware of the fact that they are citizens of their country, and that they have their rights and responsibilities. Community service can certainly raise this awareness by showing that even very young people can improve the world around them. For example, in my hometown in Russia, schoolchildren are encouraged to collect recyclable materials such as plastic, paper and glass, and everything that is collected by them accounts for three-quarters of all recyclables in the region.

In conclusion, unpaid labour for the sake of a better neighbourhood has many advantages such as learning to be caring to others and to be in charge of what happens in one’s community. While some countries such as Russia has partly adopted community service for their curricula, more countries can incorporate this element in theirs in the future.

• Paraphrase Sentence

Question: Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes

Paraphrase: It is often argued that school curricula should include community work, and pupils ought to do it free of charge.

• Thesis Statement: đây thường là câu đưa ra ý kiến của bạn, khi đề không hỏi bạn có thể bỏ qua

Question: Trong trường hợp này, đề hỏi: To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Answer: Bạn có thể thêm, This essay agrees/disagrees with  . . .

• Outlining Statement

Answer: This essay will show that such experience at school can be beneficial for children as they learn to be better people and more responsible citizens of their country.

• Main idea 1: Experience at school can be beneficial for children
• Main idea 2: Learn to be better people and more responsible citizens of their country

Vocabulary: Bên dưới là một số từ vựng trong bài, bạn thể sử dụng những từ đồng nghĩa thay thế nhưng hãy biết chọn lọc những từ có tính chất trang trọng, phù hợp với hình thức của một bài IELTS Writing Task 2:

School curricula (n) = school programme: chương trình học

Compulsory (adj): mang tính bắt buộc >< Voluntary (adj): mang tính tự nguyện

• Đồng nghĩa với Compulsory: obligatory, mandatory, required, requisite, necessary, essential, imperative, unavoidable, enforced, demanded, prescribed

Ought to V: phải làm gì đó

Pupil (n) = student: học sinh, trong một số trường hợp khác mang nghĩa là con ngươi của mắt.

• Đồng nghĩa với Pupil: student, disciple

Unpaid = free of charge: miễn phí

Labour (n): người lao động

Empathise with (v): đồng cảm (với)

• Đồng nghĩa với Empathise with: identify with, sympathize with, be in sympathy with, understand, share the feelings of, be in tune with, be on the same wavelength as, talk the same language as, relate to, feel for, have insight into
• Idiom: put oneself in someone else’s shoes: đặt mình vào hoàn cảnh của ai đó, để hiểu được vấn đề của họ

Acquire (v): đạt được

• Đồng nghĩa với Acquire (v): obtain, come by, get, receive, gain, earn, win, come into, be given, buy, purchase, procure, possess oneself of, secure, pick up, adopt, get one’s hands on, get hold of, land, bag, cop, score

Crucial (adj): trọng yếu

Vantage point (n): điểm thuận lợi

Partly adopted: tiếp nhận được phần nào

Incorporate (v) : kết hợp

• Đồng nghĩa với Incorporate (v): absorb, include, subsume, assimilate, integrate, take in, swallow up, include, contain, comprise, embody, embrace, build in, encompass, blend, mix, mingle, meld, combine, unite, join, integrate

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